tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post920948166345986762..comments2007-05-24T00:31:11.143+05:30शैलेश भारतवासीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02370360639584336023noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-81827474653388244042007-05-24T00:31:00.000+05:302007-05-24T00:31:00.000+05:30Shailesh ji bahut khoobAnitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02829772451053595246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-33872737115195486272007-04-20T16:12:00.000+05:302007-04-20T16:12:00.000+05:30waah...sirf yahi kah sakta hoo...apki kavya shaili mein jo saralta hai woh pathak ko kaafi aakarshit karti hai..isi tarah ke aane waale ache kavitao ke liye shubkamnayeinSandeephttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07021890651726494164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-31067437167639762792007-04-18T22:12:00.000+05:302007-04-18T22:12:00.000+05:30ur all pomes r to the point...everyone should knw abt this fact that only 1% of water is available on earth, so plz save water n save lifevinitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01209614724445785092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-49453034215659302252007-04-18T10:43:00.000+05:302007-04-18T10:43:00.000+05:30सच्चाई को बताती आपकी यह रचना अच्छी लगी ...पानी की कमी तो अब भी है यहाँ :)ranjuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07700299203001955054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-62588251841387325782007-04-17T23:10:00.000+05:302007-04-17T23:10:00.000+05:30sam samyik samasyaao par likhne me aapka koi jabab nahi shailesh ji....bahot sundar........smitanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-49995069716162662852007-04-17T19:27:00.000+05:302007-04-17T19:27:00.000+05:30आपने स्थितिविशेष का अच्छा चित्रण किया है, हमारे यहाँ ऐसी स्थिति हरदम बनी रहती है। अब तो आदत पड़ चुकी है...गिरिराज जोशी "कविराज"http://www.girionline.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-91007424537261039512007-04-17T17:33:00.000+05:302007-04-17T17:33:00.000+05:30आपकी यथार्थवादी कविता अच्छी लगी ....बधाईReetesh Guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12515570085939529378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-88686083917279201822007-04-17T13:28:00.000+05:302007-04-17T13:28:00.000+05:30पानी और दूध एक भाव बिक रहे है.. फिर नल सूखा रहेगा कि नहीं आप खुद ही सोचें .. अगर नल में पानी होगा तो दूध कैसे बिकेगा...<BR/><BR/>सुन्दर रचना... महानगरों का हाल भी पिछडे इलाकों का सा हो चला है... मूलभूत सुविधाओं का नदारद होना.मोहिन्दर कुमारhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02273041828671240448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25230923.post-90678239229072665752007-04-17T12:16:00.000+05:302007-04-17T12:16:00.000+05:30Shaileshji aapki kavita, pratyaksh me hamari kayda vyavastha ko darshati hai, ki kis tarah jin cheezon ke liye aam aadmi taras jata hai unhi cheezon ka sarkari daftaron me kis tarah se apvyay hota haiPankajhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16095921849463101594noreply@blogger.com